A cellphone in my life

410309379 E1A Yifi Hung

Title: A cellphone in my life

Nowadays, cellphones have become necessary devices in people’s daily life. For me, I think cellphone is really nice to my life. The only cellphone in my life is the phone I own now. It is a smartphone. Although it’s not the best phone on the market, I think it’s enough to me. In my opinion, this phone is nice and has many advantages. It is nice of its connection, entertainment and convenience.

  First, I think it’s nice because it is easy to connect others. I can connect my friends and family members. I can chat with them easily and don’t need to feel nervous and just talk to each other happily. And also, I can connect to the world by many social networks with the Internet. I can make new friends by Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, and Pinterest. For example, I make some friends on Instagram. Some of them are Korean; some are American and some are Thai! They like the same idol as me. We always chat and share the latest news. We also talk about the things happened in our own country. I think it’s also a kind of connecting to the world. So without the phone, I can’t connect with others and even lose the connection with the world.

  Second, I think it’s nice because it is good at entertainment. I always use it to listen to music. I download all the music which I like. And it displays the lyrics on the screen so that I can sing with the melody. And also, I download some game applications on my phone. In my spare time, I usually play them to kill time. I think there are millions of games in the play store (application market). So without the phone, I can’t have so much entertainment and even lose some joy in my life.

  And last, I think it’s nice because it is helpful for my learning access. I always use learning applications to learn foreign languages. I can use my phone as tools on learning. For example, I download an application called ”Doulingo”. I learn French and Korean on it. When I wait for buses or trains, I open it, learn some phrases and memorize some words. I think these applications are really useful and helpful for me. I learn so much by them. So without the phone, I can’t learn languages so convenient.

  Until now, this phone is the only phone in my life. I think it’s really good and convenient. I think it’s really nice to me. Without this phone, my life may become boring and lose some joy. To sum up, I think it’s really awesome to own this cellphone.(456)

Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.

Week 12  ID: 410309379                 Name: Yifi

Writing topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 Your essay ( 356 words) start here and please underline the topic sentences in the introduction and in the body paragraph:

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Some people thinks that once we have money, we have everything; some people said that money can’t buy everything like happiness and love or what. In my opinion, I think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Because if we have plenty of money, we’ll be able to buy whatever you like. There are three aspects I think the most important and main advantages of the statement.

First, with money, I can buy any clothes I want to buy and don’t need to care about the prices. And I can buy a big and comfortable house. I can design my house in my own idea. I really wonder to do that. I want to design my rooms, my walls and even the whole building. I think it is very important. And the other side, I can buy a safe and cool car. I can also have a humorous car driver. I will buy the things I think instead of luxuries.

And the second,to do something good to this world. If you are a good guy and you have so much money now, I'm pretty sure that you will use it to do good things. Such as giving some of the money to charity organizations, helping your local hospitals and schools...And even more, you can give some changes or bills to the poor beggar on the street. It’s time to give many good lucks to the poor when you are rich now.

And the last,to entertainment. If I have a lot of money I can buy all my idol’s albums and don’t care about the prices. I wants to buy all of them. And also, I can buy all 3C products I want to buy. I can buy all video games and play them until I become an old guy. And the most important, if I have plenty of money, I can buy all toys I want. I will love them so much. I will in the cute and lovely toy world whole days and whole life.

All I want to say is that I think money is everything.
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Revised

Some people thinks that once we have money, we have everything; some people said that money can’t buy everything like happiness and love or what. In my opinion, I think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Because if we have plenty of money, we’ll be able to buy whatever you like. So I think money is everything. There are three aspects I think the most important and main advantages of the statement.

First,with money, I can buy any clothes I want to buy and don’t need to care about the prices. And I can buy a big and comfortable house. I can design my house in my own idea. I really wonder to do that. I want to design my rooms, my walls and even the whole building. I think it is very important. And furthermore, I can buy a safe and cool car. I can also have a humorous car driver. I will buy the things I think instead of luxuries.

And the second, with money, I can do many good things to this world. If you are a good guy and you have so much money now, I'm pretty sure that you will use it to do good things. Such as giving some of the money to charity organizations, helping your local hospitals and schools...And even more, you can give some changes or bills to the poor beggar on the street. It’s time to give many good lucks to the poor when you are rich now.

And the last,  with money, I can enjoy every kinds of entertainment. If I have a lot of money I can buy all my idol’s albums and don’t care about the prices. I wants to buy all of them. And also, I can buy all 3C products I want to buy. I can buy all video games and play them until I become an old guy. And the most important, if I have plenty of money, I can buy all toys I want. I will love them so much. I will in the cute and lovely toy world whole days and whole life.

To sum up, I think money is everything.
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Reflection
I have learned that money can buy many things.

Attend a big university or small ones.

Student ID: _410309379__Name:____Yifi________ Class: _____E1A_____

Writing topics: When choosing a university abroad, some students prefer to attend a small university; others prefer to attend a big university. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Main idea 1: _wealth___	Main idea 2: _convenience___	Main idea 3: _friendly__
Get more education resources Science classes Chemical classes More attention from teachers better grades More Happiness Have fun	Lazy person Not so tired Small buildings Small campus Walk slowly Close classrooms Short distance	Know everyone Good relationships with teachers Like friends Chat with each other Know more about students fine

Your essay starts here:

When we are choosing a university abroad, some students like to attend a small university; others like a big university. And for me, I prefer to attend a small university because of its wealth, convenience and friendly.

First advantage of small universities is wealth. A small university has fewer professors but also fewer students. For example, we have just a professor of this class but in our class, there are only about ten students. So we have more attention from the teacher and the teacher can always find out our own questions about learning. And in the science class or chemical class, a small class which has few students have much more opportunities of using science devices than the big one. The students in a small class will learn more by learning everything by themselves so they will get better grades than the ones in a big class. And otherwise, they will be much happier and have lots of fun.

Second advantage of small universities is convenience. The classrooms locate very close and the distance between two classrooms is very short, so it prefer to lazy persons. Students won’t be so tired just because the classrooms are so far and they have to walk so much a long time. A small university usually has small buildings and a small campus. We can just walk slowly from one classroom to another.

And the last advantage of small universities is friendly. There are just several professors so we have a big possible that we have good relationships with them. We can know everyone in the class and even more being good friends. In a small university, we can talk to the professors just like chat with friends. And in other words, the professors can know more about the students, including their grades, ideas and thoughts. It will make each other feel fine if the professors and the students have good relationship with each other.

So these are three reasons that I think I prefer to a small university.
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Reflection
I think that this article let me find out so many advantages of small universities.